Pooka

Good work, but there is something different about this piece than the others. It's about time you started explaining what is going on with Ronny and stuff. I agree when ...

This is really good! The only part that messed me up was the being shot and still being able to think and stuff. Especially if she was shot in the ...

I'm one of those girls who if she'd not writing, she's going to explode. literally, I'm getting to the point where i randomly break down and start crying or screaming ...

ok, I'm going to start off by saying this is really good! You've got real talent and i can't wait to read the next installment, but here's a few pointers ...

I save everything to flash drives and CD's. (that happened to me last year. It sucks like crap. I had over four complete novels that i was editing and revising.) ...

someone who was in love and then got their heart smashed to pieces and now is too afraid to love again. Pooka

J. wilder's time period is probably what your looking for. You need to remember that being a pirate isn't something that people envied (despite what pirates of the caribbean say, ...

Kari is a pretty good name, but its more like an American name of an old lady:) you could try Kairi, but that's Japanese. Lia, Rin, Kai, are all good ...

OK, so if you're starting a new school it really depends on where your MC is going. In the east people mostly ignore you and leave you to your self. ...

[quote="MaresAzulados"]I'm 13, and one of the authors I dislike is Meg Cabot. I just... can't read a book of hers anymore... Ya, She has a few good ones out there, ...

That was really good! I could totally feel all the emotions running though me and got really into the beat! I don't even like heavy loud crazy music like that ...