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Re: Let's write a poem together!
like wildflowers opening in the dead of night--splitting to reveal
Apr 6, 2015 -
Re: Title Feedback
The title coupled up with your signature makes me think of intelligence agencies for some reason, but on its own it sounds to be very vague--not that it's a bad ...
Mar 22, 2015 -
Re: Poem Spot - [ on the spot ]
summer monsoon tells me he is the man kissing gravel tongues, the man being raped by the city's dull counsel-- wearing the shalwar kameez with far too many patches to ...
Mar 15, 2015 -
Re: Poem Spot - [ on the spot ]
it is autumn let us play queen tragedies do not wait for occurrence but we shall shingle their path we shall wait because patience is a tree glowing orange in ...
Mar 13, 2015 -
Re: Poem Spot - [ on the spot ]
every twilight is a monarchy, this I have grown to understand; the night is not an assassin, and the heather lapping your feet is not a ghost. I am sure ...
Mar 13, 2015 -
Re: Poem Spot - [ on the spot ]
midnight kicks in at two a.m. with your head against my shoulder, television a muted sepia amidst colourings of rain, and wind, and frost, and sleet, and downpour and-- weather ...
Mar 10, 2015 -
Re: Poem Spot - [ on the spot ]
Sheer force, she said, will lead us straight along the highway--if you can drive fast enough, maybe--into oblivion. And Afterwards? he asked, eyes hesitant, cheekbones cutting through his face like ...
Mar 9, 2015 -
Re: Make Up The Worst Possible Opening Line Ever
The last thing I remembered was the Shiny. It was pretty shiny and stuff. And stuff.
Feb 8, 2015 -
Re: Make Up The Worst Possible Opening Line Ever
she is the basket ball team with pink lips. Now this. This is literature. XDD
Feb 7, 2015 -
Re: Rate the first sentence above you
3/10 It's a spaceship in a quagmire of a sentence; it does not interest me, nor does it give me any sense of direction. For a beginning, it does't fulfil ...
Jan 17, 2015 -
Re: Rate the first sentence above you
5/10 It doesn't hook me, nor does it give me a clear visual of what-do-I-expect. It's also a drab introduction to a commonplace fact--where there are cities there are lights. ...
Jan 17, 2015 -
Re: At what age did you start writing and
It's all very vague; I can't pinpoint an exact age, but I'd have to say ... eleven? I wrote a novella back then, completed it, then abandoned writing until I ...
Dec 31, 2014 -
Re: Make Up The Worst Possible Opening Line Ever
If you're reading this ... hold on a chapter; I need to take a shower.
Dec 23, 2014 -
Re: Story in Six Words
Face first falling into graves: Unpleasant.
Dec 2, 2014 -
Re: Story in Six Words
He jumped. There was no parachute.
Nov 5, 2014
