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Re: Describe your project with three nouns!
The Equator in Zhulong : Crap, crap, and more crap Belonging, transformation, powerlessness.
Aug 8, 2018 -
Re: Rate the first sentence above you
5/10 Don't know if I would continue reading this one or not--while the first sentence does introduce a setting, [1] it doesn't hint at why this setting is important (alternatively, ...
Jul 8, 2018 -
Re: Sneaky Poetry Exchange
1. 2. 3. apologies for lateness! and thank you for waiting
Oct 17, 2017 -
Re: Sneaky Poetry Exchange
yo, can i still sign up for this?
Oct 14, 2017 -
Re: Poem Spot - [ on the spot ]
they press down on your knuckles and your veins pop. your veins pop. and they say we see you are frightened, we see you are afraid, but you gurgle through ...
Oct 7, 2016 -
Re: Story in Six Words
Exorcist: Help Wanted, Dead or Alive.
Sep 12, 2016 -
Re: Story in Six Words
The sun swelled in her belly.
Sep 9, 2016 -
Re: Title Feedback [2]
The title reminds me of Chaos Walking , except that I'm iffy about whether or not Chaos is meant to be possessive, and 'edge' is a word that comes off ...
Aug 20, 2016 -
Re: Poetry Exchange August
me as well!
Jul 19, 2016 -
Re: Poem Spot - [ on the spot ]
the sea is lamplit, star- scattered; its dunes heav- ing and breathing in eternal poisoned blue. in a tempestuous graveyard, fish flicker their feet; corpses go on living where they ...
Jun 29, 2016 -
Re: Poetry Wars
Username: Pompadour Guest Judge?: Can't! Internet issues shall be the blight of me. Poem Title: morning has wrung out her sleeves Copy of Poem: morning has wrung out her sleeves ...
Jun 27, 2016 -
Re: Who Are The Authors/Poets You Despise?
Heh, this'll take a while. Oscar Wilde's poetry. I love his plays, but his poetry and I do not get along. Most of Paulo Coelho's work I can't stand, except ...
Jun 5, 2016 -
Re: Title Feedback
I feel like this is likely to be either a Juvenile fantasy or YA fantasy novel, with a literal spin on the title (or perhaps something that links to art ...
Mar 30, 2016 -
Re: Story in Six Words
'Sun's lighting candles? Damn it--Icarus!'
Mar 24, 2016 -
Re: Where all the rubbish comes together
This is youngKelm from my novel, Tryal's Curse. Bad camera will take bad pictures, okay? A relatively more decent picture:
Mar 12, 2016
