Polkadots

Thanks. Yeah..it's a bit confusing and I'll clarify. This is her last, farewell performance at the end of the show (the ending acts are usually the worst in some circus ...

I don't really like the second version. It's a bit choppy and more info-dumpy and informal as the person above said. Just try to make it less of an "explanation" ...

I found this to be interesting and had a very eerie feel. Your word choice was keen, especially for your characters. I can't find anything to really point out. Very ...