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Re: Book of Raziel - Chapter 1
hI. i didnt read the prologue so maybe thats why i was a bit lost ( I couldnt figure out where was she, where was she going or why so ...
Jun 22, 2009 -
Re: "As I wish..."
HI. I didnt really like the topic, falling marriages and all, but thats just me. I found how you described the setting trough the dialog interesting and quite beautiful actually. ...
Jun 22, 2009 -
Re: As the World Crumbles (ch2)
hi. First of all I loved youre tittle "As the World Crumbles". I started out thinking it was going to be another melodramatic teen angst plot but was supriesed when ...
Jun 22, 2009 -
Re: My first shading
Hi. Nice drawing. The second one is odviously better. As for the shading youre off to a good start, but one thing i noticed is that it has no depth. ...
Jun 22, 2009 -
Re: Two Lovers
Hi. I think you did a preety good drawing. The proportions are good over all but i got some few minor pointers: Usually the upper arm is the same lengh ...
Jun 22, 2009
