PoetryGoddess

I absolutely loved the first two paragraphs, the contrast and the contradiction. It captured my attention almost immediately and left me wanting more... That being said, I'd have love the ...

Day dreams, nightly schemes. Daily wishes, of late night kisses. Inside me dwells a fantasy, Of what we could be. In my mind dwells imaginings, Of love and babies and ...

I like this, not any errors that i picked up. Reminds me of a book i read, "speeches that changed the world" Only yours is more like "people that changed ...

Wizadry is just right, perfect way to describe your magic usage of words. The whole coundown of hours thing gave it a nice, dramatic effect. I read this to my ...

"As your arms pulled me in, your hear swallowed me whole" this is one of my favorite lines from this piece of work!! Clever word-play!! I like the general idea ...

Wow!! How sweet, i really enjoyed reading this. Its got a really lovely ring to it and the words just seem to roll right off my tongue. Smooth word-play friend, ...

Thank you all very much, i shall most certainly take all your comments into consideration and start editing as soon as possible. 777, the poem was not mean to be ...

Loved it:)

Wow!!! This is so deep and your use of personification is amaizing. I loved it, it really has a nice take on the journey of self-discovery and all the pain ...

Oh what a mess. Sit down, don’t frown, don’t stress. There’s something that I must confess. I didn’t mean for this to happen But it did, on a day when ...

My favorite line was the part of the story where you used the balloons as a metaphor.... "i want to hold onto them and go where ever they go" it ...

This is really sad... It reminded me of a really pretty girl i knew that died of AIDS... Beautiful insight!!! Never stop writing!!!!!!!!!

Woulda loved it more if it went on for longer... I like it!!!!

wow wow wow!!! I love this.. You certainly have a way with words. This is so beautiful, clever word-play.

In a crowd full of faces In all these different places and in all these vast spaces; Yours is the face I miss, Yours are the lips I long to ...