PoetMan111

Ahem, Ahem. Capítulo Dos. Time to critique and zwiz. Firstly, I'm a little confused as to why they have to learn to act like humans. Presumably, they don't go out ...

Few comments for ya'll. Firstly, this is just the current version of the chapter. I already plan on going over it again, however, I'm devoting my time to moving forward ...

Greetings fellow... I'd say human, but I'm never sure with Meg. Hmm... good start for a story. Some parts were a bit confusing or off, but all in all, you ...

I first saw her sitting on the sun. She seemed a majestic figure, but not one capable of stealing Apollo’s Chariot, and riding the arch of the sky as she ...

First of all, thank you. Not very often I get to read surrealist, so that was good. The message/meaning/why I read the piece, however, was a little iffy. Besides being ...

@ajt- Honestly, the zombie thing was done because I didn't want to spend too much time on the description. It was written for a contest, and I had about a ...

Angela walked along the street slowly. She was never in a hurry to get anywhere. Especially now. She didn't want to go off to see her new in-laws. Not on ...

Firstly, I just want to say, why would the girl not having a name bother me? No problem with that. Also, this was a great story. I apologise for anything ...

@Kyllorac- Yeah, The pacing was a huge problem. I knew that when I was writing the story. I wrote this for a contest (I think the word cap was 5000 ...

I feel... I feel like most of these people make poor decisions, despite said decisions turning out well in SOME of their cases (like... like Jack). So he would probably ...

Nora stared blankly into the burning rubbish bin. It had been five months. Five long months. Food was scarce, leaving a constant uncomfortable pain in her stomach. Finding the next ...

It tis an intriguing So intriguing that *waves at episode of Doctor Who* Imma just post that on your wall or sommet. AnyWhovian, my comments, for the most part, are ...