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I always go up to the first post and edit that... ...That way if more people come along to crit, they are critting the improved piece, rather than picking up ...

XD I'm not lying. I'm not very good at poetry...This however was narrative and things, so it worked out alright in the end! =) And some things i do think ...

But, still. Maybe try a semi-colon! ;)

Haha, I actually found that kind of amusing! xD

Aha, thank you! ;) I'll also be going back and adding in the words that I wasnt allowed to repeat! xD Thanks for the crits! :)

haha, Yeah. The contest was for exactly 100 words, none repeated... And it appears you managed to notice the absence of the 'and' that i was desperately trying to avoid! ...

Sometimes I wonder if I'm awake when I write...looking at some of them errors! xD

//"Milly here?" I asked him. He yawned showing me his multi coloured teeth, then he scratched the hair on his chest for a minute or so, thinking. I think he ...