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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Pruning Weeds on Cedar Mulch; Life is Unfair

    Hi Aley, So I really like this poem, I think that there is great imagery here. What I feel this poem lacks is coherence. It's beautifully disconnected. There is this ...

    Jun 15, 2014


Remember the rain that made your corn grow.
— Haitian Proverb