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That was really good, but I have a few pointers. I seemed stiff, more explaining that action. Here's an example "Now, something you should know is that the two brothers ...

That is really good. It reminds me of one of my favorite books, not the plot, but your writing style.I only wonder, why does Amiria call her grandfather Canowicate, and ...

Hi! I really, liked it. Fantasy is my favorite, writing and reading. I understand about the whole spelling thing, I'm horrible at it, so I don't thing I'm qualified to ...

Wow, that was fast. I didn't expect you to post 2 things aready. It was really good, and I enjoyed it alot. My question is, Is it a native american ...

HI! OK, I know certian things about this, but clarify. Is Kate a shell? Is she really Rose? I'm slightly confused, so tell me! other than that, I love it. ...

That was confusing. Alot of it makes no sense and I had to ask you about it. I also think you need to clarify that Aether is a boy. I ...

Hi, I love the plot, but I can't say I like Elli. She's just so mean to everybody, and there doesn't even seem to be a reason. All I got ...

I love all the detail you used. Even though you didn't spend hours explaining every little thing, I feel like I can see the room and the people perfectly. The ...

Still love it. I love how Rapunzel and Armand fall head over heels in love, but Adrian and Rouge do it more quietly,almost not sure of it. It's so cute ...

It sounds really cool, but it's kinda short. I don't even know what really happened there. All I know is Jeannie lives on a beautiful island without parents, she loves ...

OK, two things. One, you spelled Stuck wrong. Two, it seems kinda weird that Asher would just start attaking Charlie. He just walkes in, starts swearing and punches her. I ...

I loved it. It's so cool reading a Rapunzel while writing one. I love the way Rapunzel falls head over heels, Dancing-around-the-room in love, while Rouge almost doesn't believe her ...

Hi! I loved your story, it's really cool to see Robin Hood from a differnt point of view, espesially a blind one. I do agree that sometimes she talks like ...

Hi! I loved your story, it caught my eye because the story on my account is a Rapunzel retelling too (though not nearly as good). The story was well written ...