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Re: Destiny prolouge
I'm honestly not sure what to say. It seems really interesting, and you do say Alexander's name a lot. I think it does have a lot of potential, so i'll ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: The American Dream- Chapter 2
Hi! it's me again. I really liked this two, it seemed very real. The characters are very three-dimentional and they have personalities. Thats really good since your only on your ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: The American Dream Chapter 1
Hey, I'm sak's and I will be your reviewer today. I really liked this piece, it's very light, which I think everyone needs at some point. I'm not sure if ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Books made into movies?
Hey K! I just have to say, I couldn't agree more. I have complained about this so many times. Ella Enchanted is one, Princess Diaries is another, Eragon and Percy ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Anna and Ryan- their story
Ok, I thought this was really cute. But why did you use the name Ryan twice? The guy from here's name was Ryan, and the guy from her star story's ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Coal Miner's daughter
I am two different coal miners....great-grand daugher? You know I have family in WV. Anyway, I really like this poem. I'm not very good at reviewing poetry, I just wanted ...
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: The One-Stop Critique Shop-- Spark's reviews *open*
Hi! I'll take one, review anything. I seriously havn't had a Review on Saks In weeks. Take your pick!
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: Her Star Story
I thought this was adorable. I loved it, and if you don't like her, please don't be mad, but it sounds like a Taylor swift song. I honestly can't think ...
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: Snow- Ch. 3
It's me again. I really like this one too. Once again, very few things to change. The only thing that really bugged me was when you said "the meat was ...
Jan 22, 2011 -
Re: Snow- chapter 2
I have decided to comment on all of Snow. This one is really good too, but it seems shorter. I like the way she's not concieded, and I love greek ...
Jan 22, 2011 -
Re: Snow- Preface and ch. 1
Hey Pointe! I am also writing a faerie tale retelling, but mine is Rapunzel. So this caught my attention. you made a few spelling and grammer mistakes, but I don't ...
Jan 20, 2011 -
Re: You Have Your God
I am a christian, but I agree with you here. I hate when people do that, and I feel major guilt whenever we drive by a homeless person. This poem ...
Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: Skandar Keynes [pencil]
Wow demeter, this is amazing. The was his head sits on his neck bugs me a little, but thats probably just me. I would definatly know who it was even ...
Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: Dear Mom (Hair Story)
While I was reading this, I was thinking "why would she want to cut her hair?" I guess it was just because I have always had long hair, and some ...
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: A reason, A season
Hey Guys! This is my first real attempt at poetry. So sorry if it's bad. I know it's full of cliche's, but this is a hard topic to write without ...
Jan 5, 2011
