Piper

This was so sad, I'm on the verge of tears right now, just to let you know. I feel so bad for the kid, it reminds me of a book ...

This was an interesting idea, and I love the wordchoice. You made some grammer errors and in doesn't flow properly at all times, but that was already talked about in ...

I have to say, I really love this. I guess I need to keep a look out for Jesus now...I love Hettie's childhood innocence, and saying she got the picture ...

Aww, this was sweet and sad at the same time. I love the way a grown woman still dreams like a child. Everyone needs a neverland, huh? I feel for ...

Hey Lily! Loved this poem, very unique. I agree that the "crooked teeth tapping against mine" is almost.....creepy. I also didn't really like the part "Crossing my heart, I hope ...

draaxy-pants! Here for a review! I liked this concept, it was funny, but you seem to not have all your puncuation down. Periods where commas should be, or awkward spacing ...

I think you used beautiful imagry, it was very well written. Just tell me he doesn't die....the helicopter saves him, right? It's right there, he just falls asleep, right? Well, ...

Honestly, I can't think of any nitpicks because I was too busy relating.I feel the same, but the guy has no idea I exist. I think this was very easily ...

This is....unbelievably amazing. The only thing I would change is when we find out he's mad. It's very sudden and you don't use enough detail, I think. But other than ...

This was great! Sad, I almost cried. One thing though, Still a few sobs wracked my body as I remembered the death of my parents and my three year old ...

Dark hair swaying like seaweed A Siren sits perched on a rock Shrouded in a fine mist She opens her mouth to sing(opens her mouth sounds a little weird to ...

The woods seemed to embrace Anwyn as she stood in front of the small rock house with her baby daughter. The sun shone through the tree tops giving the forest ...

Are you allowed to say a couple from a novel you helped write? Because personally, I think Adonis and Calypso from Ogygia are the cutest couple ever...whether Calypso likes it ...

Ok, meduim brown hair thats kind of curly, a few freckles and glasses. Also, green eyes and a small nose. BTW, I never get things like this right.

Not sure how i'm going to react to the fact that the only one I'm being paired with is a girl, I'm either going to laugh or..na, I'll just laugh