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Piper

  • Holiday Archive Re: The YWS 2011 Yearbook

    This is my squishy, and he will be mine.

    Dec 1, 2011
  • Other Re: I Believe

    This sounds a lot like something one would say in church, like where the priest says one line and the congregation says the other? With some of them, I have ...

    Nov 17, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Framework

    I took a step towards the glowering stars overhead I'm not sure glowering is the word you want. It means frowning or glaring. My heart was quiet, except for the ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Framework

    I took a step towards the glowering stars overhead I'm not sure glowering is the word you want. It means frowning or glaring. My heart was quiet, except for the ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: A howler form Mars 2

    I want you to know, I love you for this. It is totally awesome. I can swear on my beloved Zefron poster that someone must've funneled a strong and heavy ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: The Mermaids Song

    Alright, sis. Ready for that long awaited review? I peered out over the side of the ship, my fiery red locks waving in the wind. I don't think you need ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Red Riding Hood (Contest Entry)

    Hello, fellow Gryffindor here to review! Let's start, shall we? I sat on the cold stone seat and watched as Grandma paced back and forward glaring at the ground. I'd ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • General Articles Re: Harry Potter: The Legacy.

    Don't worry, Painter, it's a College thing. Twas decided at camp, a girl was convinced it was going to come when sheleft for college, so don't worry. I haven't loved ...

    Aug 14, 2011
  • Official Polls Re: Are you writing a novel?

    Yes! I get to advertise without feeling guilty...awesome! Alright, so there's this girl and she lives in my own little fantasy world were there is this guy who looks into ...

    Jul 4, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Sparrow and Spaghetti: Chapter 2 part 1

    May I start with..Oh My Gosh. I had to take a minute to breathe before writing this review. It's a very, very interesting story line and very well written. I ...

    Jul 3, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Yahweh

    Chicago was glowing with the city lights Miranda had loved all her life. It was no Big Apple, but it was home, and there were only two things in the ...

    Jul 3, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: Canada Day / 4th of July

    One year I was in Cincinnati for a Mission trip and we were there for Canada day and 4th of the July. There was a Canadian youth group there and ...

    Jul 2, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: YWS group photo!

    Do me! I'm really short and I have long brown hair.

    Jun 29, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Imaginary: Part 2

    I have to say, I love this story. It's imaginative and cute and you're able to suprise me and keep me on my toes wanting more. One thing though. “Well, ...

    Jun 29, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: A Place for You

    Hey, I'm Sakura and I'll be your reviewer today. Lets get started, shall we? I can't say I like the way you spaced your lines, it feels kind of choppy, ...

    Jun 29, 2011


I tell the neophyte: Write a million words–the absolute best you can write, then throw it all away and bravely turn your back on what you have written. At that point, you’re ready to begin.
— David Eddings