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Re: The YWS 2011 Yearbook
This is my squishy, and he will be mine.
Dec 1, 2011 -
Re: I Believe
This sounds a lot like something one would say in church, like where the priest says one line and the congregation says the other? With some of them, I have ...
Nov 17, 2011 -
Re: Framework
I took a step towards the glowering stars overhead I'm not sure glowering is the word you want. It means frowning or glaring. My heart was quiet, except for the ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Framework
I took a step towards the glowering stars overhead I'm not sure glowering is the word you want. It means frowning or glaring. My heart was quiet, except for the ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: A howler form Mars 2
I want you to know, I love you for this. It is totally awesome. I can swear on my beloved Zefron poster that someone must've funneled a strong and heavy ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: The Mermaids Song
Alright, sis. Ready for that long awaited review? I peered out over the side of the ship, my fiery red locks waving in the wind. I don't think you need ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Red Riding Hood (Contest Entry)
Hello, fellow Gryffindor here to review! Let's start, shall we? I sat on the cold stone seat and watched as Grandma paced back and forward glaring at the ground. I'd ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Harry Potter: The Legacy.
Don't worry, Painter, it's a College thing. Twas decided at camp, a girl was convinced it was going to come when sheleft for college, so don't worry. I haven't loved ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: Are you writing a novel?
Yes! I get to advertise without feeling guilty...awesome! Alright, so there's this girl and she lives in my own little fantasy world were there is this guy who looks into ...
Jul 4, 2011 -
Re: Sparrow and Spaghetti: Chapter 2 part 1
May I start with..Oh My Gosh. I had to take a minute to breathe before writing this review. It's a very, very interesting story line and very well written. I ...
Jul 3, 2011 -
Re: Yahweh
Chicago was glowing with the city lights Miranda had loved all her life. It was no Big Apple, but it was home, and there were only two things in the ...
Jul 3, 2011 -
Re: Canada Day / 4th of July
One year I was in Cincinnati for a Mission trip and we were there for Canada day and 4th of the July. There was a Canadian youth group there and ...
Jul 2, 2011 -
Re: YWS group photo!
Do me! I'm really short and I have long brown hair.
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: Imaginary: Part 2
I have to say, I love this story. It's imaginative and cute and you're able to suprise me and keep me on my toes wanting more. One thing though. “Well, ...
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: A Place for You
Hey, I'm Sakura and I'll be your reviewer today. Lets get started, shall we? I can't say I like the way you spaced your lines, it feels kind of choppy, ...
Jun 29, 2011
