Piper

Hi, I love the plot, but I can't say I like Elli. She's just so mean to everybody, and there doesn't even seem to be a reason. All I got ...

Hi, I just have one problem. We knoow nothing about Ally. Her personality isn't really developed, and we have no idea what so ever about what she looks like. Other ...

I love all the detail you used. Even though you didn't spend hours explaining every little thing, I feel like I can see the room and the people perfectly. The ...

Yes, it is a rough draft. I typed it in an hour and ran it through spell check, and i'm sick. I'll try to put it into paragraphs, but i'm ...

This is based on things that my friends and I do when we're bored in band class and a project in economics class. Plus some things I added so it's ...

Still love it. I love how Rapunzel and Armand fall head over heels in love, but Adrian and Rouge do it more quietly,almost not sure of it. It's so cute ...

I really hope this is better, because I spent an hour editing this and chapter 1

OK. I hope this is better

It sounds really cool, but it's kinda short. I don't even know what really happened there. All I know is Jeannie lives on a beautiful island without parents, she loves ...

Just to let you know, a "parody" doesn't have be exact. " Fairest" by Gail Carson Lavign (if that's how you spell it) had was snow white, and she had ...

Ok, I thought a parody was, like, weird al or epic movie were they're making fun of it, but of if thats the defintion, ok. I was'nt offended, I like ...

OK, two things. One, you spelled Stuck wrong. Two, it seems kinda weird that Asher would just start attaking Charlie. He just walkes in, starts swearing and punches her. I ...

Ok, have you read the prologe? if you had you would know that "Hazel" is acctually a princess (rapunzel), the witch is lying to her, she wants her to think ...

Fifteen year old Hazel leaned out her window, her long, braided locks falling down and down all the way to the ground and then some. It was so heavy. Hazel ...

I loved it. It's so cool reading a Rapunzel while writing one. I love the way Rapunzel falls head over heels, Dancing-around-the-room in love, while Rouge almost doesn't believe her ...