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Re: Hazel-chapter 3
Not Available. Go to the other one. If anyone knows how to comleatly get rid of this, feel free to comment.
Dec 6, 2010 -
Re: Chapter 1.
I really liked it, I agree that it is very typical, but i'm sure that won't be forever. The only thing I don't get is why Quinn really doesn't like ...
Dec 6, 2010 -
Re: Just another broken heart in the sand
That totally reminds me of a dream I had. It still haunts me. I don't really know poetry, but I'll try my best. I'm pretty sure it wasn't met to ...
Dec 5, 2010 -
Re: My life according to school
Nope, it's Zoey's kid from reality store.
Dec 4, 2010 -
Re: Chapter Two - Through the Forest
I think this one was my favorite. The way you say things are really funny, for example "He had to be sure that he wasn’t daydreaming, otherwise, he might lose ...
Dec 2, 2010 -
Re: The Cherry Code - Chapter Three - The Unexpected Company
It was really good. The only thing I want to know more about is Astor. What is his relationship with Amiria? Other than that, I couldn't think of anything else, ...
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: Chapter one, the true beginning
That was really good, but I have a few pointers. I seemed stiff, more explaining that action. Here's an example "Now, something you should know is that the two brothers ...
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: The Cherry Code- Chapter Two- Saying Goodbye
That is really good. It reminds me of one of my favorite books, not the plot, but your writing style.I only wonder, why does Amiria call her grandfather Canowicate, and ...
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: Hazel- chapter 2
Truth- Thanks, I ran it through word, but that doesn't fix everything. "There was no picture, and Hazel was almost happy. What would she do if she found out that ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: The Army of The Rulers of the Earth-Prologue
Hi! I really, liked it. Fantasy is my favorite, writing and reading. I understand about the whole spelling thing, I'm horrible at it, so I don't thing I'm qualified to ...
Nov 27, 2010 -
Re: The Cherry Code- Chapter One- The Prophecy
Wow, that was fast. I didn't expect you to post 2 things aready. It was really good, and I enjoyed it alot. My question is, Is it a native american ...
Nov 27, 2010 -
Re: Rose
HI! OK, I know certian things about this, but clarify. Is Kate a shell? Is she really Rose? I'm slightly confused, so tell me! other than that, I love it. ...
Nov 26, 2010 -
Re: Hazel- chapter 2
Hazel walked around her tower home, not sure what to do or were to go. She had everything she had ever wanted, but it was boring. She had mastered the ...
Nov 26, 2010 -
Re: Hazel- chapter 1
ok. I ran it through spellcheck, so it should be better now. The reason she takes her away over cabbage is because thats how the original story kind of went. ...
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: EvERlaSTinG
That was confusing. Alot of it makes no sense and I had to ask you about it. I also think you need to clarify that Aether is a boy. I ...
Nov 21, 2010
