PinkPanther

What a true poem. Though there were some spelling errors, i liked it very much. Many people feel that way, but i haven't heardanyone express it that well in words. ...

I liked the last line "you'll remain within me, even if it kills me". And if you can write that in 2 secs , i can't imagine what something would ...

That was very cute. Though I didn't know lack of lighting is a way to get rid of head aches. I'll make sure to remember that.

I liked that a lot. Very dramatic, though i would have put the wording differently in some places. I liked the way it flowed into each verse, and how down-to-earth ...