Pingu

I agree with MG on this. Though in saying that, it IS your writing style and it is different. It's almost as if it is your characters mind writing the ...

I already stalk people so that ones cleared.lol Though this is some helpful advice that I could use. So tonight I'll watch The Crow and listen to the entire back ...

Maybe I should have posted up the Character summaries first. As for the questions relating to Tatsu. He was fighting at their age, his personality contrasts with his appearance and ...

Thank you for your feedback. Thank you Tatra for those corrections! I'll be sure to work on that! As for some of Midnightgladius' comments. I'll try and clear this up. ...

Atmospheric. Descriptive though only enough to let the readers imagination play with it. I'm terrible at these reviews so I'll just say "Well Done". Enjoyed it greatly. The last sentance ...

I quite like it. Though I was wondering why the government would set a disease on its own people. Maybe if you added a conspiracy theory to it, like WHY ...

Curses. I need to download a PDF converter. Though I will most definitely read it once I've gotten that done!

Damn it! Now I'm in a KH mood! Can someone enlighten me on the new game? release date? anything? My Xbox has been left unchallenged since I completed GTA4 and ...

Well, I officially love the character Lylle. Seems to me like a very virile and self sufficient gal. Maybe angry? Her persuasion of Sanson was quite amusing, I'd love to ...

Okay! No problem! I'll be sure to review more! I had been reading a few in the sci-fi section and had given a small review, but I'll make sure to ...

I think this is great! I too would read on. I like your description, very lucid. This is the kind of story I would usually look for on various short ...

Also, I posted this back in the Fantasy section. Due to it being a completely fictional world and set in the present of that world.

Jiro sat atop the projection in silence, smoking his cigarette and staring blankly into the sea of lights that was Orbis city. His young face was blank and expressionless, as ...

Oh damn. Apologies guys.

Yup. Me. I look like a girl. yeah, yeah. haha