Pigeon

I miss you. And i'm I'm sure that, you miss me too, and this is what makes me feel blue. I was just wondering; do you use the word blue ...

Well, I liked this and thought it was nicely put together, so mostly just grammar nitpicks from me today :) Oh, and I haven't read Beautiful yet Sinister, but I ...

Okay, first of all, I mean no offense. Sometimes it's just irritating to see people who call themselves Good Christians who are filled with hate and condescension, and forget the ...

Hey! :) I agree with what easilyinspired said, and I have a couple of things to add. 1. Be careful of the expressions you use. You've created a grand fantasy ...

Hi! :) I'm pigeon and I'm here to review your work. The day began the same way as usual ; far too early. Even the sun seemed to have risen ...

Hi there! :) I really like the character Katy and you've set tis up to be a really interesting story! I'd love to see where it ends up. A few ...

T ake back the gifts and give them away to children who can't write their lists and so never get to play. E very other I would get rid of ...

Cigarette smoke is the first thing. It's what the air tastes like; gritty and delicious, like a curse word when you roll it around your mouth and off your tongue ...

I really liked these! Pigeons are pretty awesome! :D Just one thing: I knew I existed right on the other side Should the second 'I' be there? These are really ...

Hi! I thought this was a really beautiful poem in a twisted way. I loved pretty much the whole thing, I'm just going to have a go at reviewing the ...

Hehe, this is great. In my opinion those letters which are in the British spelling and not the American spelling aren't 'extra letters', you can hear them when the words ...

I wrote this at 1:00am yesterday... I was like half in limbo and with insomnia so... I don't know... LOL Hehe, nice poem for 1:00am! I sometimes wake up with ...

Hey! I put it through spell check and there was nothing wrong :) but I think you might have used the wrong words in some places My house is quite, ...

Oh my goodness. This is brilliant! I have no suggestions - grammar and stuff seemed fine to me. This is so clever! I liked the beginning, but I thought it ...

Hey! I'm not really sure what this is about. Maybe that's the point, but it makes it frustrating to read. Individual lines seemed incoherent by themselves, let alone the poem ...