Pigeon

Hi there :) I really liked the imagery of this poem. You create a beautiful picture. I'm a little confused as to what it's about though. Her heart knows no ...

She's a little slip of a thing, Ethereal and insubstantial. I'd reach out and take a hold of her, Pull her to me and keep her there, Safe; Act quickly, ...

So, I just read like three of your poems, and I'm pretty sure you've been looking inside my head and describing what you see. Haha :) I can relate so ...

Well, I just saw this, and there are 30 pages of it! Haha, just goes to show how many awesome members are on here! :) I'm not sure who's been ...

Haha, this is so cool. :) You can put me in if you want, and if you still need flying things that works, since I am a pigeon. (There is ...

I know it'll overtake me, your pain, your crazy grin. My poor heart can't take this, It's slowly giving in. Your pressure in (the 'in' should be 'is') unbearable, I ...

Hi, pigeon here to review :) Maryann woke up to the soft sound of rain hitting her bed room window. The sky out side was dark, cold, and almost sinister ...

Anyone read 1984? The phrase 2+2=5 was used frequently. Freedom is the freedom to say 2+2=4 melkor that's what I was thinking the whole time I was reading this! I ...

Wow, this is amazing. I don't think I really have anything helpful to offer. I will say that I loved the unobtrusive rhythm in your words. It's really beautiful. Also, ...

Hi! I wrote a poem at around midnight last night. It's a bit rough but I don't really know what to do with it. If you have time to do ...

When Gwen departed she said "my dear, We've been together fifty year. Don't let that stop you, when I am gone, From respectfully moving on. I'll rest easier, honest and ...

Anyways- so it's kind of rough, but I like it, given the conditions. I like it too :) It's very prettily written and I like how simply you deal with ...

Thanks! That all makes sense! I think my story just about fits your definition too, except for the word length :) Hemingway once wrote a six word long short story ...

What is defined as a short story? The best piece of writing I have at the moment it a short (almost 300 words) description. Would that be okay to submit? ...

Well, this is an interesting...insight! I like it. :) The only grammar things I noticed were: There's more into this should be 'in', not 'into' a teen's mind than what ...