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That makes more sense. :) In my opinion though, you should write things the way you want them to be read, so abbreviate those words! Make them vig'lant, and fav'rite, ...

Okay, sorry my review was so unclear. I'll try to explain what I meant. He finds you when you're sleeping. 7 syllables He rattles on your door. 6 syllables He ...

Come on, you can do better than that. :P What happened to your meter? You break it in just about every verse. I think I've heard this one before? And ...

Hey, :) I'm here to review as requested. (which totally made my day, I don't think anyone's requested a review from me before :D ) When I was little, life ...

As the air hung heavy and oppressed by the approaching storm, as the water glistened in the harbour, she stretched and floated with a grace and an elegance which were ...

Ah, I see. It did do that, just a little too strongly. :P I had to re-read it when I managed to get the tune out of my head, since ...

Cynicism in a poetic style which is typically romantic; fun. :) I love it. And yes, iambic pentameter is, in the words of Bernard Shaw "babyishly easy", so you have ...

A shiver. What you are to me; An inexplicable quiver. A thump in my chest, Which puts me off-guard - Throws me off-beat. And I tremble, And there's a buzzing ...

I've got noting against e-books, but they're not for me. I engage too much with what I'm reading: I've thrown books across the room when they got too distressing (I ...

breannarh covered most things, so I've only got one thing to add: Poems don't have to rhyme. I think maybe you should try out some different poetic styles and forms ...

I quite like this! It really got me in and I'd be interested to see where the story is going. :) Just a few nitpicks: Normally it would hang in ...

Taras held Nastya close to him, her amber eyes were glowing reflecting off of the light. He was not going to let her go again. They were together now and ...

This is really lovely. It's about a girl whose friend is the popular girl at school, and when she leaves the mc takes her place? Yes? That's what I got, ...

Hi there :) this is tricky to review as I don't really know what it's meant to be. It sounds like it might be a real letter you've written? Or ...

This is so beautiful! I have nothing helpful to say, sorry, I just loved the whole thing! It's so hypnotically rhythmic. A sweet surreal existence of something I once knew. ...