Pigeon

hn4vqm0cd86302vdv Linguistic and intrapersonal

Hi there! Pigeon here to review! Firstly I want to say: I really like this, and I think it has a lot of potential. Because of that, I'm going to ...

I was tempted to post some of my creative writing major work here for reviews, but it would have been too risky. I heard that someone was unable to hand ...

I really like this, it's cute :) There's not really anything wrong with your grammar, and you have a very consistent writing style which is good. I have a couple ...

Hey there Karzkin :) This is my disclaimer saying that even though I'm going to be mean and pedantic, I do like this poem. It has so much atmosphere, I ...

It is a sort of perfection which buzzes and whines over the table shimmering and glistening with unearthly glamour, wings catching the light and throwing it back broken into rainbow ...

has marriage become a joke? No, I think the majority of people take it quite seriously. Is it an outdated concept? As tr3x said, the current definition may be outdated, ...

Hi there! I thought this was a really lovely song, and I like the garden theme. You could maybe do even more with that, like talking about how the tree ...

Hi there! Pigeon here to review. :) I really like your concept and you write descriptions beautifully. All I'm really going to do is point out your grammatical errors, because ...

This is a great story! Really powerful. I loved it. The only suggestions I have are a few places where your phrasing could be clearer. The little girl's dress trailed ...

Audy covered most things, so I just have a couple of thoughts to add. My English teachers are always telling me this: A good short story has one setting and ...

That being said, I want to point out that I do, in fact, know that Every Single Word Is Cap(ed). lol I know, I know. I like it like that, ...

Hi there! Pigeon here to review! :D This is a really lovely piece. The general mood is captured very well and you carry of the rhyming scheme quite nicely. The ...

Wow, this is really tricky. I think I would feel a lot better about it if they'd waited for one of them to die and then eaten him. That being ...

Hehe, thanks again! I think I get it now. :) I guess it makes sense that they would wait for really solid evidence. I disagree with the 'intrinsically disordered' thing, ...