Pigeon

Here are the things which stuck out to me reading this: Its resolute delicacy too good to touch, But too alluring not to touch – I didn't like the repetition ...

Joanna Newsom. Mia Wasikowska.

Hecatia!!!!!!!!!! You posted!!!!!!!! This is funny! ^_^ There's just a couple of things I'm not sure about: Once upon a time there was a woodcutter who had four sons. Why ...

Hi there, pigeon here to review. :) This is cute, I really like it. Your writing style is very smooth and consistent and your descriptions are lovely. A pungent aroma ...

Anger. It is something of an enigma. Why is there such an emotion? Is anger vital to our evolution? Anger might have been a mutation that is non-beneficial to us. ...

Kyllorac reviewed. It went on for what felt like hours. A cacophony of corrections. An avalanche of advice. A bombardment of - Kyllorac looked sharply at the narrator. The narrator ...

"I agreeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!" Pigeon moaned, stumbling lethargically into the room. Flux sighed. The concurrence of a girl who was, by now, at least 60% zombie didn't do a lot to reassure ...

I'm confused. Is this a topic for debate? You've just stated your opinion, I don't know what you want to discuss. Since I can find several things to dispute in ...

After a quick head count to ensure that no one had gotten lost along the way, the group began to carefully make their way back to Resources, the mist curling ...

I really like this! Especially the ending! I think your ideas are really good and the story line is interesting and a good length. My only real criticism is that ...

Pigeon3 Yay! :D

Thanks guys! Haha, fist I have no punctuation and HarryPotterRocks wants some, then I put it in and Karzkin wants it out. :P I'll try to find a balance. @Karzkin: ...

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in struggle town = having difficulties. e.g. I'm in struggle town with this homework. devo = devastated e.g. I'm so devo that I couldn't make it to the party. true ...

Here to review as requested :) Corrections and notes are in red. Octavius. It%u2019s streets were broad and well lit. It%u2019s houses all looked alike. The shops had no difference ...