Pigeon

This is wonderful! I really enjoyed it. Your imagery is fluid and beautiful and your ideas are clearly expressed so my critiques are mostly grammar related. There are unwanted times ...

But back to Gossip Girl versus Terminator - why are shows like Gossip Girl targeted for girls and Terminator for boys/ why do many girls like Gossip Girl and boys ...

Yesterday, I saw big purple elephants eating my house. They sucked out my book shelves and ate my Oscar Wilde collection. And the Foxtrot comic book that was drenched in ...

(Ah, I'm just going to skip over Justagirl's post since I'm not sure she understood. I hope that's okay.) Fret.

I just have one or two suggestions for this. The action of the story sounds a lot like a six year old. e.g. “Hello?! I’m talking to you!” and I ...

Here to review as requested :) Grammatical corrections are in red. Other thoughts are in blue. Staring through a small circular glass window, Mark thought he had never seen a ...

Yesterday, I saw big purple elephants eating my house. They sucked out my book shelves and ate my Oscar Wilde collection. And the Foxtrot comic book that was drenched in ...

Injustice, apathy and ignorance.

Mean.

Justin Beiber: 43. Twilight: 45. (-1) Harry Potter: 52. Miley Cyrus: 49. Hunger Games: 52. Vampire Diaries: 50. YWS: 52. Pretty Little Liars: 51. X-Men: 51. Books: 51. (+1) Pigs: ...

Purse

I think that the purpose of art is to express emotions and perspectives, etc. So if it is meaningful and expresses something, then it is art, but if it is ...

omigosh I love this! In my chem class we had to act out oxygen gas by linking arms in pairs, so I guess this poem is a pretty natural place ...

Yay! You posted it! This isn't going to be much of a review, since you've heard most of my thoughts already, although I was a bit rushed before :p Most ...

Animal cruelty is not the only reason to go vegetarian. Farming animals for meat, especially cows, has a huge environmental impact. It takes far more plants to feed a cow ...