PiesAreSquared

Steal is already heavy, and lead is used to make artificial sparring swords. I suppose I could use it, though. I'll edit it in later. Let me look around for ...

You don't wanna try, mess. These reviews take hours.

Alright. I am still on my second chapter will pu in the POV from the third onwards. Somehow I just can't shake off the feeling that a sodden sword is ...

Doe

Hmm I'll put in some edits. My character profile has Ryandrol in his late forties. I did mention that his hair was whitening around the edges. Yep the family is ...

Edited!!!

I think I will edit both into the story! Thanks for the tips!

Here I am again! I am so so so so sorry I didn't do this before. When you want to have an event of which there are two conspirators "betraying" ...

I will edit it asap!

Ryandrol is the week after this i hae a third part for aley, which is her last part for awhile.

I'm laughing my head ff right now because I just realized my review is longer than your piece. Muhahahahahaha

How do people get Iggy to review an entire novel....I must be doin something wrong!

Yes she does!

I sort of suspected the vampires were cameos. But hey, greatest stories come from mistakes.

Olive I am magnificently sorry about such a sloppily late reply. I do need to buck up in this regard. I can't find a good way to replace the pronouns ...