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Re: Digital Shizz
Hey jenthura, these pictures are just superb! i especially like the first one, it reminds me of a comic strip that i read not too long ago!! Have a great ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Pyrigia Levis
This is a great story but I would like to point out some things, lightyears lightyears is not a word, it is light-years, the black branches linked and melded together, ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: My Story-Chapter Two
hey josh, when i wrote josh it was a typo, the MC was actually not covered in any blood at all
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: My Story-Chapter One
Hey Josh, Thanks for the review. Just to tell someone, my chapters are too short, and although i have already posted my next chapter, i would try to combine the ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: A mind/body
First i must say I really like this especially this part My mind is a cube. I am a series of Euclidian shapes. I am dependent on Euclid. As a ...
Jan 4, 2011 -
Re: My Story-Chapter Two
I woke up to the smell of blood. My eyes were covered with blood, which I presumed were my own. The slippery liquid clung to my skin as I tried ...
Jan 4, 2011 -
Re: I Need to Review you! Puh-lease? O_o (OPEN)
I'm
Jan 4, 2011 -
Re: My Story-Chapter One
this was a dream i had on new years eve, anything not understood in this chapter would be in the next It was sixty-seven years ago. I was a twenty-three ...
Jan 3, 2011 -
Re: Betrayal
Her eyes glint coldly in malice A great piece of poetry, if i am to be a judge of poetry. Maybe for this line you can put "her dark eyes ...
Nov 15, 2010 -
Re: Some Haiku and Tanka
and they became burnt out bulbs. (Meant to be that the stars seemed like burnt out light bulbs in the sky... couldn't word it correctly. Any thoughts?) burnt out light ...
Nov 11, 2010 -
Re: How some people learn
Jents, the cone question was a question in my math book, it is not wrong, you just have to use ratio to solve it.
Nov 3, 2010 -
Re: An Immigrant's Tale
Is this a Novel? I as because there is a "chapter one" near the top. if it is a novel, it should be posted in the "historical fiction novel" section, ...
Nov 1, 2010 -
Re: Last Art Dump
Remember the cute picture of my cousin I drew? This is my cousin's mom. But actually, the little girl's not really a cousin. Her dad is my blood cousin, so ...
Nov 1, 2010 -
Re: Howard's predicament-Chapter One
Well done, your writing style is definitely showing its true colors. It doesn't really explain itself, Z, but as a prologue I guess it's okay. Keep writing! ok, jents, it ...
Nov 1, 2010 -
Re: The Spirit Boy: Chapter Five (END)
Okay, Let me say this, your writings are better than mine, but they're still not good enough “You cannot yet go back, Artem. You never even said goodbye.” Ok, This ...
Oct 30, 2010
