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Ok, now i have a little more description here, but go and tear it up if you like it, and if you don't, shred it :) During the so called ...

The Earth is raging in war. The Rulers seeks total domination over the earth. The Resistance seeks to overthrow the oppression that they saw all around them. An alien race ...

You should not put your poems in "spoilers", they really do spoil the poem

I stared into the night sky and pondered life on earth. Why are we here? Who should we aim to please? In the end i guess it doesn't matter, we ...

Hey, nice story here...great description. A white wolf with blue eyes like ice, You could say “A white wolf with ice-blue eyes”. Her monstrous fangs dug deep into the flesh ...

Hey, you double posted this, and you’re underage! :D

Interesting, but there are some mistakes here. Her back hit the cold painted wall, pressed on the bed, against the wall and between him. This sentence should be broken up ...

Hey, nice poem here, at the end of the third line, the word disappear should have an s at the end. This would not only add to the rhyme, as ...

Needew threw the replica down on the marble floor, his green hair quivering with anger. The bullet wound that crossed his right cheek smarted, adding fuel to his anger. Five ...

It is time to end this war... Wrapped thickly in my cloak, I steadily drove my way through the forests’ roads towards Moscow. It had been a difficult journey, but ...

Name: Starkiller Rank: Assassin Speciality: Assassination Favorite color: Blood red What next, sir?

Name: Starkiller Rank: Assassin Speciality: Assassination Favorite color: Blood red what are we supposed to do besides writing out our profiles?

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Captain Needew and his men were on this flight for five hours now, they were deep in enemy territory. Their stealth aircraft could only go a few more minutes before ...

Hey, great setting, but... After one more scrutinizing glance you should have made Nurse Suh throw scrutinizing glances earlier in the story before writing “after one more”, Her supple body ...