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Hi Caitlin, Welcome to YWS, I love Science fiction too. It's such a great way to express myself! If you need any help, have something to review or have a ...

Hey, welcome to YWS. Hope you have a great time here. To tell the truth, I never actually wrote stories until I came here :P This site does make your ...

slang is one you people will consider bad English. It is a mix of quite a few languages, and is called Singlish (i'm from Singapore) Most of what we say ...

I've been feeling stressed recently, and i think this is a good way yo release stress. Anyone got ORIGINAL jokes to post? Well i will start. What language do ducks, ...

Hey jash, since you

This isn’t the best I can write, but i need to know exactly where i need to improve, so tear it up. Octavius. It’s streets were broad and well lit. ...

Hi, today is review day and i’m here to review. Firstly, this is interesting (i find all things interesting). Well written, as it is compact. One thing i don’t like ...

Hey, it’s review day so i am here. Now this is an interesting piece, (do note that i find all things that i am interested in interesting). You don’t have ...

Hey, I’m reviewing because of review day. This is very interesting, (i’m always interested), It has good description, but it has the spelling errors here and there. ( I wonder ...

Hey, I’m doing this because of review day. I don’t usually review...but now i do. You have spelling errors and some other miscellaneous mistakes, but other than that it is ...

I like this story, it’s very descriptive, and very entertaining, although there is room for improvement. We wait at the gas station for what feels like ages, then start looking ...

Hey, this is a great story. You should not write in present tense as it is harder to read. Overall very good, but there is some grammar mistakes here and ...

This is my first storybook, so it is not very good (The invasion by the Narl-Knu) On Sunday, 3rd August, 20002 above Oslo, the sky darkened suddenly. Soon, triangular shaped ...

P.S ~ The more people from the Rulers (those who "defect" will be new members that join) one can coerce to defect, the better. It is necessary to have more ...

Hey a belated welcome, and you should mark your territory before someone steps on your toes!!!:D