PickledChrissy

Thanks, VegasLights! I'll do that! :D

Thanks, Prose! I did notice that some were repetitive, and was slightly worried about that. I'll give it a once-over and see if I can't brush it up a little. ...

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! :D

Thanks! Yeah, the hatred part didn't come across quite right. Thank you for pointing it out! I'll fix it up as soon as I can.

Thanks, Lavvie! I try and work on the tone of the story.

Thanks, Elikia! Yeah, I should have gone into the parents viewpoint. Guess that is next! :D

Thank you!

Thank you for the review! I'll get that fixed. :D

Thanks, Noelle. I've always had a problem with the commas. Thanks for helping with them. No one has before. I'll be doing research. Thank you! :D

Okay, thanks!

Thank you for reviewing! I was worrying about how to says where and when. The date on the letters set them in the center of world-war one, and also places ...

Okay... I think I can do that. Isn't much room for detail in a short story, but I can try. I've actually been considering adapting this into a novel. Thank ...

Thanks for the review! What did you think I need to fix? What needs to be added to it?

Thanks for the review! I did mean Edward, actually... I think I need to spend more time proofreading. ;)

Thanks for the review! I did mean Edward, actually... I think I need to spend more time proofreading. ;)