PickledChrissy

Thank you!

Thanks for the review! I'm especially grateful for your pointing out the need to be careful when describing how I started working in the company. I've been in it so ...

Thanks for the review! I really appreciated it. Yes, they are moving out of the cell. Next chapter will move him onwards.

Thank you for the review! Did you have a suggestion for how I could make it clearer at the beginning?

Thank you for the review! :)

Thanks for the review! Thanks also for the tips regarding those spots that didn't quite flow.

Thank you! :) This really helps.

Thanks for the review!

Thanks! I was trying to hint on their past without being too explicit. I wanted to leave questions unanswered, but it did come out a little confused. Maybe if he ...

Thanks! I'm happy you liked it. I've been working on this story for a while and fallen in love with it, but I didn't expect such an enthusiastic response.:)

Thanks! As far as the name normally applying to a sweet lady, that was intentional. Melody is one of my favorite characters because she is the most conflicted.

Thank you for the review! His eyes are supposed to be gray, so that was me slipping up. Melody's name was intentional. Her character has a major arc that is ...

Thanks for the review! It really helps. One thing, what do you think of their names? I've had some negative feedback concerning Melody.

Thanks! This really helped. :)

Thanks, Alias! :D