PickledChrissy

Thank you for both your praise and your kind criticism. I'll definitely give your suggestions thoughts, especially those related to repetition and being to tell-y.

Thank you! I'll try to sort the memories and give them more context. The part with the baby is my favorite as well.

Thank you for the review! I'll go through and see if I can consolidate those sections. :D

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Thanks for the review, Rose! I appreciate the encouragement.

Hello Rebel, Your poem is concise and deliberate in its wording, delivering a very clear image and message. It is crafted with a chisel and seems almost to be built ...

I'll work at combining them. Thanks.

Thank you! Is there a specific verse you recommend I cut/trim/rewrite?

Thank you, Rose! I don't write poetry very often, but sometimes the mood takes me. Your praise has given me motivation. I'll keep at it!

Thank you, Akira! :)

Hello Rinisha! No, Eugene Ryder was an accident. :) The name just happened. The Dark Mystery Man is the spirit of death. Thank you for the kind words! I appreciate ...

Thank you for the review!

Thanks!

Thanks!

Thanks Jade! You mentioned unneeded details. Do you have an example?