Photon

This is a pretty intriguing tear-jerker. A couple of typos here and there. And I wish the ending was expanded just a tad bit. Thumbs up! =D

A faint, shuttering swish of a noise starts to creep up into the house stabbing Lars and I with surprise. I suggest it may be coming from outside, so we ...

First off, I'm going to throw you with a "thumbs up" and a pat on the back. I enjoyed this. Now there are a couple of flaws here and there, ...

Short and sweet. I liked it. You had a couple of personified phrases which caught my eye. (thumbs up) I would have to agree with inkwell on the last two ...

Interesting. I kind of felt this minute shadow of depression, until I finished reading everything. I like it! As stated in previous reviews/comments/replies, the rhymes you toyed with were fluid ...

:?: Great. Just fantastic. The infamous ringing of inevitable lethargy. What a stupid clock; not the kind that most kids have these days, but those ancient and tarnished traditional wind-ups ...