PhoenixBishop

Thus far I've committed to only one death to a main character in my series. Quite honestly I was biased and hated him, and decided this on the first page ...

In my opinion you can go too far, but that limit is determined by you. If you like it there will probably be others out there who also like the ...

You are new I'm guessing. Well Welcome to YWS. :D First off outlines are very useful. They make the writing process easier and they greatly decrease errors in plot and ...

I think it's a interesting idea that should be approached carefully. It can lend it self to being cheesy easily, but it can be done. For one when the gifted ...

Well you have multiple choices. What you're looking for is Omniscient point of view. Which is basically you telling the story as a all knowing God of the world. You'd ...

Thanks for the input Thinker, and Karsten. Karsten- You helped me alot. I see what you mean about the test so I've added parts for physical and emotional. No I ...

I was sitting in my psychology class when I got this idea. We were talking about intelligence testing and how they used it to classify people. So I came up ...

Jeffery always was never "weak", but always had trouble keeping what he wanted for too long. He always kept praying for hope, until one day he gave up and turned ...

11th draft Rosey? You must be one of those types that is never completely happy what she writes. Anyway Rosey is right, you need to develop their past. Also you ...

Honestly that sounds like a whole lot more work. People seem to think that self publishing is easier. It's not, as you said you have no real way to promote ...

Now that you have the basic formula to making a villain lets get more complicated. Let's start with reasons for them to do their deeds. This is a further detailed ...

This is very true, because of my lack of dating I'm not sure when I came up with the idea for the novel I've been working on for years. All ...

:D There are many type of antagonist, but the kind I wish to focus on are the villains. If you have villains in your story, this is one of the ...

I think the title is perfectly fine, most titles relate to a specific piece of the story not the whole plot, and generally not the main emotion. Stillbourne Angel is ...

I think it can work if you approach it in the right way. I think it would be difficult to make a whole novel out of it but a short ...