PhoenixBishop

Well I think it comes into question what you mean by too good. This I've noticed is a problem with villains. Writers tend to overpower their villains to the point ...

As Rosey said, it needs to be as close to perfect as possible, but you can start looking for agents now. Do extensive research into the agents you wish to ...

I agree with what Twit and Rosey said. Said is what one would call a invisible word. Nobody notices much unless some attention is drawn to it. For example if ...

Actually, I think his eyes are green in the book if I'm not mistaken. Even if I'm wrong that really does not matter. Jagged said it well. When it comes ...

I use yeah a lot.

"If you were to die tomorrow, my greatest regret would be that I didn't kill you."

A characters motives decide it for me. If they're doing evil or good things, I ask myself what is their goal in doing this. I tend tie in their goals ...

[cough Edward in Twilight cough cough I completely forgot about him. Well I take that as a good sign, I'm finally starting to forget that book.

For one this is the right forum. As for the idea. Scientist already know the temperature of the sun and would have no reason to use a thermometer. As for ...

Well, added to this list should be telepathy. I mean, the standard idea is, guy (never girl, it seems) I'm not sure where you got this idea, almost all the ...

I think it can work if you have the personality for it. Some people are good at working with others and bouncing ideas off each other. I personally would never ...

I think it's a fine description. Unique, but not so far out there that know sane person would actually think of.

First an idea comes to me. Then I pick my cast of characters. Then I spend several laborious years beating out a plot.

My empath was so bogged down with emotions that eventually they became detached from them. You know how we see war and murders on the news so much that we ...

A while back I did a tip on how to make Love triangles. As seen here This is part of dealing with love series that I have planned. Love triangles ...