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Phoenix lands for a review Alec Baldwin walked down that dark street and wore his black hat and coat. He covered his mouth with that red cloth and turned to ...

Phoenix lands for a review The machines she’s wired to scream her departure. This sounds awkard. I see where you are going with this, but the sentence structure is a ...

Phoenix lands for a review. My teacher said to never center your work unless their is a deep meaning to the centering. That would be possible for a poem in ...

Sorry for the horrible grammar before. I did this on my phone. I fixed most of it now though. Seb- Sebastian was tired. The constant need to deal with people ...

Phoenix lands for a review Zachary was mostly a normal, fifteen year-old teenager with teenage problems. He liked girls, listened to music, a few pimples every now and then, but ...

Phoenix lands for a review. Rob: Why? he says with a very disappointed look on his face. WHY? Personal pet peeve of mine. Don't put any word in all caps. ...

Phoenix lands for a review I stand small on the concrete step that has lodged itself in my memory. It is where I told Jass I loved him, where I ...

Phoenix lands for a review I'm not great with poetry reviews, but I will give you my general outlook on the poem. I liked the idea of this poem. I ...

Phoenix lands for a review Writing :Okay, the major problem of this piece is what is known as "The talking head" This is when little desciption is given and thus ...

Phoenix lands for a review. I liked this. It was a reader friendly piece. By that I mean, I read it from start to finish without getting bogged down and ...

Working on it o.o Name: Niton Age :27 Gender :Male Race: Human Rank: Royal Healer Alligence : Lyansa Appearance: He is tall and lanky. Because of his heritage he has ...

"Kill myself so I go out on my own terms." Meg If you could kill one person without getting caught. Who would it be?

Phoenix lands for a review I liked this, but let's nit pick a little. The Writing: The point of view was okay, but I think at times it was too ...

Exiled It's the year 2244 the planet was invaded by a race of aliens known as the Luganda. Their plan was to colonize our planet and force us into reservations. ...

Under Constuction Name: Sebastien Hamen Age: 20 Gender: Male Appearance : He has a strong build and long brown hair, with light green eyes. Of course less modern looking. Personality ...