Phoenix23

Fine piece of writing. Everything is almost flawless. The theme is captured quite well.

Good poem and funny too. The things we come up during class......... keep going!

A really thoughtful piece. Yeah most of us would want to see those happy carefree days come back, when life was innocent. I like it..... Keep going :)

The idea is good but you need to work on the composition of the poem. Its good to organize the poem in stanzas. Also you should avoid using the abbreviations.

Good work. I can relate myself to it. Being lost and alone.......... and knowing that there are no guiding stars along the way..... keep going :)

A really good poem. Friendship is a really beautiful thing and your poem captures the theme nicely. You are right sometimes words are just not enough to describe the love ...

Welcome Sarah. I went through exactly the same thing when i was writing my first post :) . Its pretty hard to make yourself seem interesting sometimes. Anyways hope you ...

Its a very good poem.Touched me really. Keep going!

Hey Mikko thanks for the corrections. It will sure help me in the future. :)

Maybe one day i'll look down the memory lane And say, It was a teenage thing But right now It hurts so much i cant breath Maybe one day i'll ...

I like the theme of the poem. Being different, being a "freak" is not an easy thing. But those who are should be proud because they took the "less traveled ...

hey im new here. :) thanks for the welcome