Phoenix23

Wow, this is a good poem. The flow and rhythm was good. "Whispered false statements. An empty kiss - like starched, dried stems, and silicon petals. Pretty, harmless exuberance, no ...

This is a really beautiful poem. It made me smile and I understood the theme. The flow was really good. The way you described the "real magic" was great. We ...

Old and worn, she looks in the mirror Beside it, in a golden frame, stands a beautiful face Eyes, so full of dreams and hopes now tell a tale of ...

Hey, this was a good piece. Funny and witty :). I really got some interesting insight into a cat's perspective. I will sure remember this the next time I try ...

Aj, I hope you will hold on, best of luck and best wishes.

This is a good piece. I liked the way you captured the whole heartbreak scenario, the imagery as good. This line, "Total destruction, heartfelt eruption, Total destruction, Yeah, Total Destruction!" ...

This is a really beautiful piece. The flow and the rhythm was flawless. The theme was quite good, a mixture of sadness and hope combined. I especially liked the stanza, ...

I have got just one thing to say... Wow. You have left me speechless. This is an absolutely amazing piece and you have got great imagery. I thoroughly enjoyed every ...

Memories, good and sweet, tokens of love and friendship, Turned bitter and poisonous tortured my soul, became impossible to bear, So I wrenched them apart, One by one, like faded ...

A really good poem, cute and sad at the same time :). It makes me smile. Love is beautiful thing but yeah it has to go away sometime, no matter ...

This is a good poem, especially the way it ended. It made me laugh, though the beginning was quite different. I really liked the second and third stanza, it does ...

I am not a poet critic at all but to be honest I did not understand much what you are trying to say. Firstly it is submitted in the poetry ...

This is a great piece. it reflects the ongoing situation perfectly, from the eyes of someone who has actually been there. Someone who has suffered from it. And the message ...

In an empty, dark room I sit by the wall, huddled into a corner with a million shards Of my broken dreams scattered everywhere, Destroyed forever, By mere Conventions..........

Awesome! Made me see Harry Potter in an entirely new way. Really hilarious. Harry Potter of the new technology era just could not get better. :) Loved it! Keep up ...