Phoenix23

Firstly, welcome back Aj :). This is a really good poem. The flow of the poem is smooth and perfect. This is what I liked best about it. The theme, ...

Hello ShinDa, :). I think its time for some honest criticism. Will you please review my poem? Here is the link:

I am not really good at reviewing stuff, I will try to be helpful though.. Okay, so this piece here was cute to read, though it was a bit cliched. ...

Every step planned, every movement precise, like a perfectly executed dance. Nothing out of place, out of ordinary, everything is as it should be And my life is perfect. The ...

Hello! This is a good poem. Even if you didn't use rhymes, the poem had a certain flow to it that I liked. The theme here is really good. Love ...

Hi JP, Can you please review my story I will be grateful for the help. Cheers, Phoenix23

This is a really thoughtful piece. In fact, it struck straight home. Most of us are the part of the "herd mentality" as you call it. When was the last ...

The wind blows in from the little crack in the window. Its hot and stuffy inside my room and the fresh air rushes in, bringing with it the smell of ...

Beautiful poem. The language is really smooth and flowing. The way you captured that "finding the one" theme is really cute. They are right, it is every girl's dream to ...

What is the way?

Can anybody tell me about it?

Hey there. This was a good one. Made me laugh :). You know these ad people and the stuff they show, sometimes they show things which are way far from ...

Hello there. You know I can understand the emotion you described in the story. Sometimes you do feel that way, like all is lost and you just don't want to..... ...

Hey. This is a good one. Your imagery is real good. i liked the way the story moves. Especially the thoughts of the main character. The lines, "So what if ...

This is a good piece. It has that haunting tone, the sort that raises goosebumps. The workings of the "insane mind" as we call it is always amazing. I liked ...