Phoenix23
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is human soul eatable?
Jun 30, 2012
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I could have blogged about it, but I needed more people to view this piece. After all what is a better way to spend my last points on YWS? =) ...
Nov 23, 2011
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Wow. This is amazing. I wish I could hear you sing this one :). The topic you chose is one of the biggest issues of the modern world. Racism and ...
Nov 16, 2011
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Mum
Nov 4, 2011
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Chocolate
Nov 4, 2011
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Cocaine
Nov 3, 2011
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Crazy
Nov 2, 2011
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This is really good. I liked the way you portrayed the theme. Yes, the streets are never silent and life keeps moving on. And yet, on the same streets there ...
Oct 29, 2011
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This is the sort of piece that sends chills down your spine. "yet each man kills the thing he loves..." this quote has always intrigued me. Yes, sometimes desire and ...
Oct 29, 2011
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This is a very powerful poem. It captured my interest right from the beginning. The imagery is so good you can almost feel the trauma and the pain the person ...
Oct 25, 2011
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This is a really good beginning of a novel. It seemed a bit confused in the beginning, but clears in the end and captures the readers interest. I like the ...
Oct 24, 2011
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I think this is a beginning of a great mystery. The plot is strong and the characters are intriguing. You have described the emotions very well here. I look forward ...
Oct 24, 2011
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This is a really good poem, and on a controversial issue. Coming from a country where dictatorship and tyranny is a norm, I can relate to the poem.The tyrants always ...
Oct 24, 2011
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This is a short poem, just something I came up with the other day. In the deathly silence of the night, Shadows creep out From the closet of the darkest ...
Oct 21, 2011
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This is very good poem. The emotions you have described are really vivid, and in a way, I can relate to them. When you long for a person, it is ...
Oct 16, 2011
