Phoenix

Thanks for the comments and advice everyone :D Sorry about the format of the text being hard to read.. I clicked on the 'Pre' thing which says will reserve the ...

hey, aww thankyou very much for the comments Aedomir :D I will continue writing if I can in between all my school deadlines (gah!) :s

I don't think i'll keep this name, but let's go with it until I can think up a better one =P so anyway, this is the prologue (well, about half ...

thanks snoink and jasmine. :]

A Faded Memory Are you standing beside me? Or A million miles away? So here is your body But where Is your soul? I wonder if it floated away To ...

Great poem! I really enjoyed reading this ;] I can't think of anything else to say that hasn't already been said, sooo good job!

This has the makings of a great poem, and the concept is interesting. It's just the grammer and punctuation which lets it down, so I would work on that. Good ...

Lovely poem! I especially liked the first verse..and the clever little twist at the end. :D Good job :wink:

Upon Broken Lands The great blue canvas is swiftly painted With the darkest shade of black. And so it begins. The sky screams with rage As it rips itself apart ...

What did you do, read the poem to a spider and it keeled over and died? :shock: Anyway great poem! great sense of emotion..

The poem doesn't flow perfectly, but apart from that I thought it was rather good, and very relatable :]

Over the last month or two i've seen- Pirates 3 - I thought was rather good, and the CG effects were pretty spectacular, but the plot was pretty confuzing! Surf's ...

I think they're awesome! Love like winter is one of my favourite songs.

8/10 so cute! =]

Found it on a google search. :wink: