Phoebe

I think you will find that you will receive as much (or more) constructive feedback than you could ever dream of here. ^~

bigbadbear: I generally write poetry and am beginning to dabble in short stories, usually the dramatic and political and occasionally edging into the macabre. Thanks for the reminder. ^~ Dreamer: ...

That, therefore, will have to suffice. I'm Phoebe. For those who aren't acquainted with Greek mythology, the TV show Charmed , or astronomy, it's pronounced roughly "fee-bee," not "fo-ee-bee" and ...