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Phoebe

  • Scripts Re: Failure To Comply (script)

    Actually, I rather like the bluntness--it's layered, is it not? Because while John seems to be the compliant roommate, he too has a slip in his book with a name ...

    Dec 23, 2007
  • General Articles Re: Chew Gum, Don't Worry, Be Happy

    an almost cult-like following school. Delete "school." A school and a following are the same thing, and redundancy is not a friend. and the teacher who allows the ignorance of ...

    Dec 23, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: and so this ends.

    Much obliged for the comments, Suzanne; and yes, it is about a break-up--or, more specifically, a one-sided break-up. You know the sort. And out of curiosity, is your signature from ...

    Dec 23, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: and so this ends.

    [deleted]

    Dec 23, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: delete

    I think, perhaps, your title put me off my stomach when it came to this story. The teeth-gritting use of capitals--the triple exclamation point (oh dear)--it was really too much ...

    Dec 23, 2007
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [2]

    2/10 No me gusta.

    Dec 22, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: The Lindsay

    Dilbert is the shiz. I like noodles, too.

    Dec 21, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: last poem of summer

    I agree with what the others have said: there are too many questions here. It's so much more enigmatic to write the answers but not the questions, than the questions ...

    Dec 21, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: I Am poetry

    my name: whatever you want to call me, babe i am: a whore i wonder: why they call me that i see: my cat, asleep, soft breathing i want: just ...

    Dec 21, 2007
  • Media Reviews Re: Jodi Picoult

    I've never read them, but I know my younger sister is quite obsessed with My Sister's Keeper. As soon as I'm done with my Dostoevsky, I'm going to read it.

    Dec 21, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Giants

    This is about flowers suffering under the shade of trees, yes? A little more metaphorical than realistic--one rarely sees flowers that don't thrive under the protection of the greater oaks, ...

    Dec 21, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Something Exciting that Happens to Be Untitled

    I'm not sure what's more amusing--the "test" itself or smorgishborg's critique. 1. OPEC is the pits. 2. Rhyming is the sux0rs. 3. Five points each to Snoink and Suzanne in ...

    Dec 21, 2007
  • Welcome Mat Re: You know, I can't think of a title--

    bigbadbear: I generally write poetry and am beginning to dabble in short stories, usually the dramatic and political and occasionally edging into the macabre. Thanks for the reminder. ^~ Dreamer: ...

    Dec 21, 2007
  • Welcome Mat Re: You know, I can't think of a title--

    That, therefore, will have to suffice. I'm Phoebe. For those who aren't acquainted with Greek mythology, the TV show Charmed , or astronomy, it's pronounced roughly "fee-bee," not "fo-ee-bee" and ...

    Dec 21, 2007


One by one they went / And, though each laughed as he returned to earth / Their souls were in their eyes.
— Alfred Noyes (Watchers of the Sky)