Pforrest

Chapter 2: The Ascension The clanking of metal, the screeching of gears, the bang of things falling against the stone walls of the tower and the echo of their voices ...

well, you got my view and review... aren't you glad i clicked it now. p.s i should be doing my homework since i've got soooooooo much of it, but instead ...

I'm not really sure how to analyse this one but it seems awfully deep and a little existential even. Quite morbid too.

Chapter 1: Exodus The tower which sat on a foundation of black stone climbed heights beyond sight, engulfed in dense clouds that blanketed the dull sky. Not a single shade ...

Awesome poem! I love how the depth develops in the second stanza, where it becomes more than just a car ride, but a question about man and his creations. I ...

I don't have a title for it at the moment but i'm using 'The Light of a Thousand Suns,' at the moment. Check it out!

'I want to be where the people are... up where they walk, up they run, up where they stay all day in the-' oh wait, that's from the little mermaid. ...

That's basically it! I'm working on a novel - i've written about 10 chapters so far but i have to earn some points before i can upload any more. So ...

Hi! I thought the dialogue in the beginning was great. It flowed naturally, and i like how you didn't have to say 'said,' yet i knew who was speaking. (This ...

Prologue: The Most Precious of Children The cover of night veiled William and Juniper as they hurried across the dark, verdant fields. The silhouette of great stone monuments and magnificent ...

This is really clever! Aside from the small mistakes here and there (which, I might add, are very rare), you write very well and you seem to have a way ...