Periwinkle

:lol: I absolutely hated that. She didn't build this book up all too well. It seemed completely random to me. And, didn't Edward and the rest of the Cullens call ...

And why did Renesmee grow so fast? I didn't get that either. The only reason I could come up with was that Meyer wanted Jacob/Renesme to seem more perfect together? ...

Did anyone read the Breaking Dawn spoiler that Meyer released? It's kind of big, but I assumed that would happen so it didn't really surprise me.

I haven't read it yet. I read Blue Bloods a couple of months ago after I finished the Twilight Series . I thought the take on vampires was interesting, but ...

No, Alice pwns the series. Booyah! :lol:

Oh, no, don't change her. I just meant that about the blue veins because that's a pivotal part of the author's vampire myth - and her appearance just reminds me ...

Oh, I forgot to mention something in my critique. How does she have a cell phone? You say that she only has old clothes and few possessions and how her ...

I've just read that Saphira is going to find a mate in Brisingr. That's going to be awkward...

Aestar: Thanks a lot for your review! I really don't mind waiting. Muteman: Thanks, too, I'm working on my word choice right now. I'm trying to make it much more ...

Thanks everyone! I've completely edited now based on everyone's suggestions and JFW's nitpicks. Ashleylee: Aww...thanks...I have a weird thing about describing something repeatedly in the beginning (I

Re-review... When I woke up in the morning, I thought it was just another ordinary day. You know, wake up, eat breakfast, go to school, get picked on all day, ...

Pinata: Hahaa....thanks. Robin: That's a really interesting diagram. Thanks! Thanks for everything else, too. JFW: Very helpful. I didn't even realize my sentences were that long. You can tell I'm ...

seems you added more. :) Sataru froze. Sentri found her neck... the hairs on the back of her neck stood up and her heart beat quickened.He surprised her by kissing ...

Tehee...I like it when the egg talks.

I don't think you meant to make this board?