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Re: The Reason (part one)
I'm the first reviewer! Yay? Anyways...I liked your story but it's a bit rough. You change POV and tense a couple of times and you do a lot of telling ...
Mar 2, 2008
I'm the first reviewer! Yay? Anyways...I liked your story but it's a bit rough. You change POV and tense a couple of times and you do a lot of telling ...
Mar 2, 2008
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