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Very nice I like it, really draws you in with it's sudden outburst of violence followed by the aftermath of bleak imagery. The description of the battle itself seemed a ...

Wow..this is a really gripping opening, it made me want more. ^^ It was gritty which I like in a fantasy story, especially when Shaitha was being whipped...that moment was ...

I really liked the introduction to this story...the perspective from the villagers adds a certain anticaption for the reader, and touches of detail within the crowd itself made it more ...

Ahhhh righty so thats where you go lol! Thanks again :) Think I'll have a gander at that 'before you post thread' just to get with grips with things (and ...

Heheh thanks claudette :D I'll just have a little explore of the site now XD is there a specific place where you can view peoples work and post your own? ...

Hello all! I am new to Yws and it seems to be a great place for creativity ^^. Hmm..well at the moment I'm a student waiting for my A level ...