PerforatedxHearts

Mweheee! Yay! *Claps hands* I'm happy. Alright, JC. (By the way, I'll probably end up PM-ing this to you if you don't see this anyways. Heehee) I'm confused about how ...

Hehe. I agree. So far, I've changed the highschool thing plus changed pt.2 to first person on paper. Tomorrow, I'm going to start building up mroe info. it's just that ...

So, what do ya'll think about it? I hope ya'll got the twist.

And now, the LAST PART. PART TWO *&*&*&*&*&*&*&*&*&*&* “I’m so sorry for your loss.” “I wish I could’ve done something more to help.” “He was a good man.” Sober, grim ...

Ohmegahhh. *Dies of happiness* I swear, I'm about to faint from all this good feedback. I was hoping the best for this story, and it looks like I got it. ...

Allright. Let me explain a fewthings. Do you remember the part where she says something like, "I knew the heartbreaking line of, “Let’s just be friends.” Yeaah. Well, even though ...

Uglies was a good book. So was Pretties, and Specials. But I was disappointed at the overall ending of the trilogy. It could've been resolved more and better.

Yeah...I've never really liked this story either. Trust me. It was just a spur-of-the-moment type of story, without any real plot or structure, or for that matter: characters. Hehe.