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Ma'am Sam of the moddity. ^^ You're awesome. I've altered that line. I might change it again later, depending. Also, you flipped to the naughty rather rapidly. ;) *Hearts* Le ...

I don’t know how much of a comment I’m going to be able to give you. I’m really liking this. You end on a fantastic line, really. It’s not what ...

Thanks, everyone, for the comments. ^^ Lyn > Yes, it was to avoid the rhyme, any rhyme would have ruined the feel of the poem. You kids are awesome squared ...

Thank you all for the fantastic comments so quick. You are all beyond the awesome in my book. All of your comments go on board with my edits - and ...

Thank you all, once again. ^^ I'm really glad you like it. *Hearts* Le Penguin.

– chapter four. ‘But the again,’ I interrupted Mav. ‘He might not be. Who thinks there’s a third option?’ “Then” Chapter five. Fal, I don’t care if they’ve murdered Valiad ...

Oh, thank you all! ^^ I'm really glad you like the poem. I'll see what I can do about the issues when I can. (uni hates me) But all your ...

Oh, thank you all for the comments! I'm always forgetting I've posted things now. >< Uni. Grah. Well, I'll take all comments on board, and work on this as soon ...

Thank you so much, you three, you guys rock my socks. ^^ I'm really glad you liked it. *Hearts* Le Penguin.

Thank you all so much! I'm going to look at what I think I'll do with this, and work on is as much as I can. All of the comments ...

Squee, I love you all for commenting. I appreicate it so much, and will come back to actually impliment suggestions, and work on this properly in mere moments - I'm ...

Hey there again, Gadi. ^^ Okay. So now I see your intended structure, it's a cute and interesting idea. I appreciate the meaning and the way you've proceeded with this, ...

Okay. Did you use the "Pre" feature? It keeps your previous structure and whatnot. If not, the the style may not be supported on YWs. I am unsure as to ...

All suggestions taken on baord and applied! *salutes* ^^ Thanks to you both for the reviews, it's *hugely* appreicated. ^^ *Hearts* Le Penguin.

Hey thanks everyone for the comments, they're hugely appreciated. ^^ LoveableLittleSock: Feckless: 1. ineffective; incompetent; futile: feckless attempts to repair the plumbing. 2. having no sense of