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Hey Lette! Here as requested. I’m pretty tired so I hope I’m going to make sense here. Now, I know this is a response to the poem in workshop, and ...

Heys Kyll, I'm rather interested in this, as I've been dabbling in the prose poetry recently. I think that we, perhaps view the genre differently however. I run with the ...

Hi PE! I like the poem you have here because it's a solid poem. You have a good structure and good lines, and your rhyme is suitable if not brilliant. ...

Hey there! You certainly have written a character sketch, if you will, of winter. You have some strong, evocative images which work perfectly to your theme. However, you also don’t ...

Hi Aliyah! I like what you have here! You’ve got a nice short poem which is to the point and has some utterly gorgeous imagery – “this violent choral clash” ...

Hey Creative! I know this is a personal poem, so I hope you're prepared for a little bit of heartache. I find that whenever anyone comments on a personal poem ...

Hey Walks! Audy sent me your way to have a look at this poem. She’s already reviewed it so you’ve got an excellent couple of tips and comments already; Lord ...

Hey Kyll! So. I don't know why Audy has to have posted before everything I'm doing, but I'm not even going to read her review, because... yeah. So! This has ...

Hey Blue! I know I’m following Audster here and her review is incredible, so I won’t beat that test of yours. However, I’ll give you the best I have, for ...

Hi Kyll! It’s been forever and a day since I last looked at your works, I think. So it’s about time I had a good look at something. Firstly, I ...

Hi Lette! I know you posted this a little while ago, but I’m here to review it regardless. I’m trying to clear out my works with 1 review list. :) ...

Hey Deanie! You pointed me in chat, and thus here I am. You have a cute kind of poem here, the meaning is very clear and you've chosen a sweet ...

I'm going to review this, but I'm not sure what is actually going to happen. This is utterly gorgeous, you've written lovely things before but this has the right kind ...

Hey there, Flower! This is a really sweet sonnet and I'm wondering if you've used iambic pentameter with this or not. This being a question because you can't really alter ...

Thankyou. -Penguin.