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Re: The Cra-yon Lay-onds Two
I cannot help but adore the Roaring dragon (scientific name Draco Clamarius). that is, perhaps, my most loved part of this text. I do look forward to your next installment ...
Aug 31, 2007 -
Re: the girl who cried wolf
A rather delightful little thing. I enjoyed reading it. A small issue: and image of a broken star Is this meant to be 'an' instead of 'and'? It would seem ...
Aug 31, 2007 -
Re: The Last Prophet
When he sees me look at me, Just the one thing that stuck out (grammar and punctuation arent my strong point) I rather thing this should be "when he sees ...
Aug 30, 2007 -
Re: Heart Break
The pressure, as always, began in the heart. Slowly it then wormed its way through the blood. She could feel the pressure grow, seeping into her bones with terrible pain. ...
Aug 30, 2007 -
Re: 500 Words
The title threw me off actually; I thought someone had gone into my piece and edited my tag. It didn't help that my 500 words are just underneath yours. Addressing ...
Aug 30, 2007 -
Re: The Cra-yon Lay-onds: A Highly Experimental Piece of Writing
I just LOL'd like I have never LOL'd before! Fantastic, really. I was reading with my brother beside me and we both started laughing at the same time. I think ...
Aug 29, 2007 -
Re: 500 Words
Thankus Muchus for the commentation =D Tis most welcome. (compliments make me *giggle* ) Umm, to answer your questions, the first comma is necessary I'll show why (if i can) ...
Aug 29, 2007 -
Re: 500 Words
Eee! it won hehe. Thanks kids. Tap…tap…tap… The rhythmic click of heels on the cold tile floor suited the décor of the hallway. You could expect clicking heels amongst the ...
Aug 29, 2007 -
Re: As Beautiful...
I loved this, not just because its a cute peice of fluff (which it is ehee) but also because you got a good theme going. I have no problem with ...
Aug 29, 2007 -
Re: Fickle
I rather liked this. Simple, and an interesting concept, with the name and jazz, muchas annoying if you have a hard name though i suppose hehe. Either way I think ...
Aug 29, 2007 -
Re: Lost Highway
Fantastic, I completely loved this, really. It sucked me in right from the get-go (which of course means its muchas brilliante). I think you described it perfectly for your context ...
Aug 29, 2007 -
Re: Cinderella Parody
Had to give my kudos (like many before me) to a quite delightful parody. I was hestitant at first, but, as always, curiosity overcame me, and I just had to ...
Aug 29, 2007 -
Re: 500 Words
I have to agree with all of the above =F hehe. I quite liked the concept of the story, and found that if i read it properly each of the ...
Aug 29, 2007 -
Re: Hide and Seek
Hey kids, muchas gracias on the commentation =D and the praise lol it's very much appreciated. Sokool; those sentances in the inverted commas ('HEHE') are actually thoughts, this I believe, ...
Aug 5, 2007 -
Re: Hide and Seek
She was wading through a sea of clothing, whites, blacks, greys, as all the drab colours of the world sat at her feet. Standing on a tall pile of clothing ...
Aug 3, 2007
