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  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Cra-yon Lay-onds Two

    I cannot help but adore the Roaring dragon (scientific name Draco Clamarius). that is, perhaps, my most loved part of this text. I do look forward to your next installment ...

    Aug 31, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: the girl who cried wolf

    A rather delightful little thing. I enjoyed reading it. A small issue: and image of a broken star Is this meant to be 'an' instead of 'and'? It would seem ...

    Aug 31, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Last Prophet

    When he sees me look at me, Just the one thing that stuck out (grammar and punctuation arent my strong point) I rather thing this should be "when he sees ...

    Aug 30, 2007
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Heart Break

    The pressure, as always, began in the heart. Slowly it then wormed its way through the blood. She could feel the pressure grow, seeping into her bones with terrible pain. ...

    Aug 30, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: 500 Words

    The title threw me off actually; I thought someone had gone into my piece and edited my tag. It didn't help that my 500 words are just underneath yours. Addressing ...

    Aug 30, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Cra-yon Lay-onds: A Highly Experimental Piece of Writing

    I just LOL'd like I have never LOL'd before! Fantastic, really. I was reading with my brother beside me and we both started laughing at the same time. I think ...

    Aug 29, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: 500 Words

    Thankus Muchus for the commentation =D Tis most welcome. (compliments make me *giggle* ) Umm, to answer your questions, the first comma is necessary I'll show why (if i can) ...

    Aug 29, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: 500 Words

    Eee! it won hehe. Thanks kids. Tap…tap…tap… The rhythmic click of heels on the cold tile floor suited the décor of the hallway. You could expect clicking heels amongst the ...

    Aug 29, 2007
  • Lyric Poetry Re: As Beautiful...

    I loved this, not just because its a cute peice of fluff (which it is ehee) but also because you got a good theme going. I have no problem with ...

    Aug 29, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: Fickle

    I rather liked this. Simple, and an interesting concept, with the name and jazz, muchas annoying if you have a hard name though i suppose hehe. Either way I think ...

    Aug 29, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: Lost Highway

    Fantastic, I completely loved this, really. It sucked me in right from the get-go (which of course means its muchas brilliante). I think you described it perfectly for your context ...

    Aug 29, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Cinderella Parody

    Had to give my kudos (like many before me) to a quite delightful parody. I was hestitant at first, but, as always, curiosity overcame me, and I just had to ...

    Aug 29, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: 500 Words

    I have to agree with all of the above =F hehe. I quite liked the concept of the story, and found that if i read it properly each of the ...

    Aug 29, 2007
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Hide and Seek

    Hey kids, muchas gracias on the commentation =D and the praise lol it's very much appreciated. Sokool; those sentances in the inverted commas ('HEHE') are actually thoughts, this I believe, ...

    Aug 5, 2007
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Hide and Seek

    She was wading through a sea of clothing, whites, blacks, greys, as all the drab colours of the world sat at her feet. Standing on a tall pile of clothing ...

    Aug 3, 2007


Whenever you find you are on the side of the majority, it is time to pause and reflect.
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