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7/10 - whoa thats mad blurry hehe.

Hehe, Everyone love penguins... for good reason ;) and I love yours =D :P *hearts* Le Penguin.

Hokay, these seems to be part of a story, like a small excerpt (I can't spell for the life of me >.

Hehe, thankyou muchly for the commentation, I actually noticed both of those problems mere moments ago, before I read your comment, but thankyou so very much for pointing them out ...

The pristine blue of her eyes shone, encased in the pale porcelain of her skin. The cold perfection of that skin stretched across her face, broken, only briefly, by her ...

While I do think this is a wonderfully described poem, I also agree with Sean Pendr in that I think a more free form style of poetry may be the ...

A Lovely poem! Really Really lovely. While I do agree that some of the rhyming was forced I still think this was a wonderful poem. Good imagery and description, with ...

Hey, this was quite good =D Some small issues come in the line "and flesh" after the breadcrumbs, it seems out of place, and completely unneccesary. Though I may be ...

Ahh, I thank you all most enthusiastically =D All of your commentatation's are most undoubtedly welcome. I have to say, of all the compliments I ever get, the ones for ...

I just read Vampirates by Justin Somper. It was what one might call a definitive "teen" novel, almost definately aimed at that age group ahaah. Which would explain why I ...

Thankyou muchly for the commentation =D it it muchas appreciated. *hearts* Le Penguin.

Hehe. Muchas Gracias there Lizzy. As always the comments are appreciated... I never throught to make it a poem... might be interesting.. might also be too hard for me ahaha. ...

Thankyou both for your commentation. I have amended that last line, I completely agree about the 'never' =D. Your commentations are more than welcome, as always, and much aprreciated. *heartS* ...

The last shining light in a sea of grey, I miss your warm glow. Glittering baubles of unfettered love, Frozen in time, gliding to the cold stone earth. A breath ...

WOOOO!